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The music was the best part

The graphics were good, but I felt the story wasn't very well explained and there was a lack of animation after grabbing the starman.

But that music was brilliant - where did you find it?

cavifax responds:

Thanks, yes, need more animation and more ease to more reality and action,
yes, need more action.

The Music after grabbing the starman is from the Audio Portal, search for Monstrous Turtles!
The music from the menu is from Peter de Man. visit her website and in the "Discography" and search for "Cyborgs Trip" music, yeah, it's free :D

Decent animation

The animation was good, though the characters looked a bit too easy to draw, and the text often ended up off the screen before it could be read.

Don't worry about drawing faces, clothes, arms and legs. First attempts may look rubbish, but there's plenty to inspire you on the internet.

Just make sure you're next video has more detail and is easier to understand and you'll do fine next time.

survivalpivots responds:

thanks

Not bad for a first try

Given the circumstances in which this video was made, this isn't too bad. I've seen worse first videos.

If you have a computer at home, you may be able to find a free Flash developer kit online (an open source kit, not an illegal copy of the Macromedia/Adobe program) such as FlashDevelop.

Also, invest in a good microphone, or access some royalty free sound effects online.

Billywhizz635 responds:

It could have been a lot better, yeah. I do have a pretty good mike, but considering I only had about 3 hours to make this, and I couldn't access a mike at school... I know I'm better than this, I just need to get this FlashDevelop thing haha :P

Oh, and thanks for the good review. Stuff like the one below I just really don't like. Haha :P thanks man!

Not the greatest animator, but improving :)

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